Select Page

Free Homepage Review

It’s really hard to be objective

about your own work.

Why?

Because you’re too close to it, and have put so much energy and attention into it that you can’t see clearly anymore.

It happens to all of us. 

The antidote is feedback. 

 

Feedback is having your work reflected back to you-

> so you can optimize what’s already working

> so you can understand where the gaps are

> so you can prioritize the next steps

A homepage review is:

"

A recorded video “tour” of your homepage from the perspective of a first-time visitor (me!)

"

A strategic overview detailing the gaps and opportunities on your website

"

A chance to see what working with me would be like

A homepage review is a good fit for you if:

$

You are new to writing your own copy, and not sure if your message is clear

$

You’ve been DIYing your website design and copywriting for years, and have never had any professional feedback on your site

$

Your homepage is either very short, or very long, and you don’t know what’s missing, or which content belongs somewhere else

$

You prefer to receive feedback in a format you can consume at your own pace

Jackie Johansen

EVOLUTIONARY ASTROLOGER

Receiving Susan’s feedback on my website was such a gift. She’s intuitive, kind, and has such a sharp eye. She didn’t try to change my style, tone, or unique way of writing, rather, she helped uplift what was already there with such practical suggestions that made the whole piece shine. Her feedback helped me be more me, convey my message more clearly, and offered feedback that I was so excited to implement. If you’re looking to strengthen your writing, gain perspective, and sharpen your voice, Susan can help.

Let’s Get Started!

Do you review website tech?

Website tech can cause lots of headaches, I get it….and that’s not my area of expertise. But I can refer you to colleagues!

What about website design?

 

I am not a website designer, but I can’t look at a site without looking at its design, too. When I look at a website, what I’m doing is putting myself into a visitor’s perspective. Navigation is a big part of that, as well as the general layout of your page, the images used there, the fonts and colours- all these are pieces of the puzzle.

But I am not a designer! If you are looking specifically for that service, I can refer you to a colleague.

Can you write it for me?

 

I’m here to help you get clear on what to write about, and then guide the writing and editing process, and hold you accountable till it gets published- that’s my style!

If that’s not what you’re looking for, I know some very talented copywriters who can definitely write it for you, and I’m happy to refer you to them if that’s what you need.

I might be biased, but I’m pretty sure that you can successfully do your own writing. That’s what I’m here for!

What can I do with the review?

Great question!

The review is designed to give you an overview of what I see when I first visit your homepage. In other words, my user experience. I will give you some concrete steps to take to improve that experience. I will comment on the copywriting, and let you know how it flows, if there is missing information, and how it feels over-all. From there, you can decide which of my suggestions makes the most sense to you, and take it from there. Sometimes, people make these changes themselves, and sometimes they want to work in collaboration.

Skip to content